Sweet work man, but those blue boxs with text screw with the composition of the piece, finding a way to apply them to the piece in a more effective manner would make the piece perfect!
i cant decide if i like it or not...its a bit odd. i liek the white and the mutlicolors, but the purple background i dont like. plus just having blue boxes with text in them doesnt seem to go with the piece. just keep the white part, or write with that brush (or make the white n colors part a brush). u can write like simplicity is futile with the brush using caligraphy. id like that more.