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HURTING YOU by ignitepjp HURTING YOU by ignitepjp
resurgere stock used a bit in the background...the rest is all me.
comments greatly appreciated.
im doing a lot of render practice
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:icontrigness:
I like the render but I'm not a fan of the bg. It looks dull and unfinished - if you did more with it, it would make your render look a million times better. I would try switching up your focal point a bit as well. Centering everything isn't always a good thing, some things look better unbalanced.
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:icondunnodt:
yup, there is parts where your render appear sharp, to me, shud play abit more with your bg so that your render can blend in with the bg, maybe adding depts to your bg:D
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Nexxia May 8, 2007  Student Digital Artist
Spencer pretty much hit the nail on the head there. It's not bad, just doesn't seem finished yet.

Could definitely use more depth, and I'd work on colors too. The background is too monochromatic for me.
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:icondarkenedcloud:
nice render man, love it....the bg could use some work though, how it blends and everything
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pedribeiro May 8, 2007   Digital Artist
Looks killer!
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:icontheartofhouse:
render is nice :D

but i gotta help you with antialiasing :D
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:iconignitepjp:
thanks, and yeah that'd be great. hit me up on msn sometime.
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SymbolisticFate May 7, 2007   Interface Designer
Awsome...i need your email or something so i can send you my render / renders.
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:iconignitepjp:
parkerj_pete@hotmail.com :)
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:iconvertigo-overdose:
parts of your render seema bit sharp, if u dont alrdy, render it with 16x16 Anti-aliasing, and dont use sharpen effect, unlees you are going for a little sharpness, which u could just add in with phoshop

but its a nice piece
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